Part 1 for this series of blog posts can be found
here.
Part 2 for this series of blog posts can be found
here.
Part 3 for this series of blog posts can be found
here.
Over the last few weeks I've been writing a song, starting first with the lyrics. In Part 1 I wrote a rough draft of the lyrics, and in Part 2 I edited those lyrics. Part 3 was a rough sample of the vocal melody. Today I'm going to post a demo of the song! That's right, you'll get to hear the song from start to finish, at least in some form or another.
I decided to demo this using an acoustic guitar, because that's probably the easiest way for me to do it in such a short period of time. I think I would like this song to have an electric guitar instead, but I'm not 100% sure yet, and it sounds good on acoustic anyway. I figured I'd record it on acoustic and figure those details out later.
Without further ado, here's the demo:
This is a very rough draft, mind you, but I did my best given the time constraints, and it is my hope that next week, the song will sound even better!
Writing in a mode other than Ionian (major) or Aeolian (minor) is an interesting challenge.
Over the years I have written a number of songs, all of which I think have either been in a major or a minor key. Most pop, rock, and country songs are in a major or minor key. To write in Dorian is interesting, because in Dorian you are using the same notes as a regular minor key, but in a different order.
To clarify, this song is in D Dorian (D E F G A B C D). which uses the same notes as A minor (A B C D E F G A). So how did I make sure that the song was in D Dorian and not A minor? I made sure that the D note in my melody was strongly emphasized (the word "blood" in "There's blood in the fields" was emphasized when I sang that line), and made sure that the chord progression started with a Dm, The song keeps coming back to Dm, in the verse and the chorus.
There weren't many Dorian songs out there to help guide me when writing this song
I went looking for songs in Dorian mode and came up with a few:
Oye Como Va by Santana (cover, originally by Tito Puente)
What Shall We Do With the Drunken Soldier? (traditional)
Another Brick in the Wall by Pink Floyd
Scarborough Fair (traditional)
Get Lucky by Daft Punk
Horse With No Name by America
and maybe four or five others...
By comparison, almost every other pop, rock, and country song out there are written in a major or minor key! At any rate, I figured having a list of songs handy that are in Dorian mode would make writing the song easier if I got stuck.
Scarborough Fair was helpful, because I liked how the chords keep coming back to the root chord at the end of most phrases. I can't remember if I had the idea to keep coming back to Dm in my song because of Scarborough Fair, but that might've been the reason.
Otherwise, I didn't really use the other songs to help me write the song, but it's good when you're stuck to know that someone else has probably done something similar before you (but of course, it's up to you to make your take on something unique).
Dorian has some interesting things going for it that I'd like to explore further, which I intend to do with this song as I refine it. Next week I should hopefully have a more fleshed out version of this song. Keep writing!
(The next part of this series of posts, part 5, is
here)